Brett Baldelomar
5/2/2014 04:13:10 am
I think that video games are beneficial because they improve your hand-eye coordination. After reading the article, I agree that with a small amount of video game violence isn't going to turn you into a criminal. One of my reasons is the findings show that violent games have significant short-term affect. Researchers have tested the effects of the games on teens brains. Another reason is violent video games don't always produce violent people. I play violent video games and I'm not violent at all.
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destiny
5/2/2014 04:19:15 am
good job 👌
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Leo
5/2/2014 04:29:07 am
Great job Brett
Alex
5/2/2014 04:30:38 am
Very good job on writing
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Andrew .A
5/2/2014 04:30:44 am
Good introduction
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destiny
5/2/2014 04:30:59 am
Nice use of detail 😏👌👊👏💪
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Jimmy
5/2/2014 04:31:27 am
This is a reasonable paragraph. Great Job!
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Sabrina
5/2/2014 04:15:33 am
I think that video games are beneficial because it depends on what video games you play. After reading the article, I agree that video games are also entertaining. Most video games have social skills because it has good coordination. Also, it shows good evidence because most video games are influence.
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Destinyc:
5/2/2014 04:34:56 am
It might sound better if you added more details.👌😏
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Kaylynn(:
5/2/2014 04:36:14 am
Your paragraph was really good(: but you should of added a little bit more information :3
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Destiny
5/2/2014 04:15:58 am
I think that video games are harmful because they can influence teenagers to become violent towards others and can cause them to withdraw socially. After reading the article I am convinced that video games are harmful to teens. Video games have shown significant short term affects. Researchers tested games on teens brains in order to realize that there were short term affects for video game addicts. Studies show that they can be a negative influence. Teens can transfer violence into the real world due to the Rated M video games.
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Chris
5/2/2014 04:32:43 am
Good job you did good gramer and right spelling
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Kaylynn(:
5/2/2014 04:34:20 am
I liked how you put "video games have shown significant short term affects" :D
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Brett
5/2/2014 04:38:44 am
Good job🙌👏
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I think that video games are beneficial because they are highly entertaining. After reading the article, I agree that video games are beneficial. When I get Bored, I play video games and they provide entertainment. They are also a good social experience. More than half of teens play interactive games with other people who are in the same room.
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Leo
5/2/2014 04:26:13 am
Good job Jian
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Jimmy
5/2/2014 04:19:55 am
I think video games are beneficial because it is educational by teaching kids.Video games can be sometimes bad because it can be very violent.Video games are helpful to kids learning english.I think some shooting games can help peoples reaction much faster.Like increasing your movement and seeing things faster.
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Jimmy
5/2/2014 04:34:15 am
Great job!
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Andrew A.
5/2/2014 04:19:57 am
I think that video games are beneficial because it increases your reflexes. After reading the article, I believe that video games are beneficial because it can make you better problem solvers and increase your reflexes. Video games makes you better problem solvers because, if you have to figure out a problem in the game you have to try to figure it out. Video games increase your reflexes because, it helps what you are going to do in a earthquake, fire, or a terrorist attack.
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Ryan T
5/2/2014 04:21:50 am
Justification
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Vivianne
5/2/2014 04:22:02 am
I think that video games are beneficial because it can distract teens from doing something educational. An article convinced me that video games can distract young people from real life. One reason is that if they play more and more games they will become addicted, distracting them from real life. In the article game on or game over by Oscar Gomez it said "If teens are already having problems, games allow them to escape into a fantasy world." Another reason is if they start playing they might not be able to stop. In the same article it had stated "It is difficult for some to land back to reality." There are many reasons why I think that video games are beneficial.
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Kaylynn(:
5/2/2014 04:29:53 am
I agree with your perspective(:
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destiny
5/2/2014 04:32:12 am
Very informative 。😏
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Jimmy
5/2/2014 04:36:14 am
Great Job very reasonable.
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Kaylynn(:
5/2/2014 04:22:24 am
I think that video games are beneficial because they provide entertainment for people to play. After reading this article, I believe that video games are beneficial for teens. Video games are very entertaining because they make you feel related. For some people who wants to be relaxed, they would play a video game and they would instantly feel calm and relaxed because they are focused in the video game. Another reason why video games are beneficial is because it helps you with your hand-eye coordination. When you play with a video game, you would usually use your hands to play them and you would use your hands really fast in the game control which helps you with your hand eye coordination.
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Chareles
5/2/2014 04:31:01 am
I like how you wrote your paragraph.
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Naweh
5/2/2014 04:22:31 am
I support that video games are beneficial because it is entertaining and relaxing. After reading the article, I am not convinced that video games are harmful. One reason is that some video games are educational. Another reason is that there are positive influence of video games. Video games effect parts of the brain that control vision and coordination.
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Chris
5/2/2014 04:30:24 am
Good work :)
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Charles
5/2/2014 04:23:17 am
I think that video games are beneficial because that can improve many job skills. After reading the article, I believe that video games are beneficial. Also one reason that video games are beneficial is that they can improve hand-eye coordination. Video games can also improve problem solving. This improvement to the brain can help gamers think of solutions and that helps train the brain.
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Naweh
5/2/2014 04:32:59 am
I like how you said that video game can improve your job skills.
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Andrew A.
5/2/2014 04:34:08 am
Good job
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Ryan
5/2/2014 04:23:55 am
I think that video games are beneficial because video games help eye coordination and could improve the ability to pilot an aircraft.After reading the article I,believe that video games could help people in life to over come things such as the ability to pilot an aircraft.My reason that I believe video games are beneficial is because it helps people to do things they learned in video games.My evidence is in the article where the person says that video games could help you have the skill to pilot a aircraft.My second reason is that video games also help you have better eye coordination.My evidence comes from the article where the person talks about video games helping people have better eye coordination.
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Moses
5/2/2014 04:24:38 am
I think that video games are a main reason to cause aggression to teens because the games include teens to be aggressive. After reading this article I believe that video games are harmful to teens because they can cause to increase their aggression. One reason for teens being aggressive is that they can become more aggressive. My evidence is that they raise aggression and lower their self control. Other reasons is that teens get addicted to the video games.
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Vivianne
5/2/2014 04:35:23 am
I agree on your perspective
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Derek
5/2/2014 04:25:37 am
I think video games are harmful because it waste time and distract you from what is important.after reading an article I agree that games are harmful. One reason is that it is very violent . Most teen's favorite games are mature and are unappropriate. Video games are also addictive and from my experience, I usually spend long periods of time playing games once I get my hands on them.
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Leo
5/2/2014 04:25:43 am
In my opinion video games are beneficial because they help simulate events that happen in real life. They also entertain and relax people. Another reason why I that video games are beneficial is because they help improve your Hand eye coordination and your reflexes. The last reason is because they make people better at problem solving.
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Saiyang Liu
5/2/2014 04:25:45 am
I think that video games are harmful because some video games are violent,is bad for teens.After reading the article,I agree that video games are harmful to teens,because it's bad for teens eyes.The first reason support my sentence is violent games is bad to teens,because some video games are contain extreme violence,that stirs up extreme emotion.The second reason is video games is bad for teens eyes,because when teens playing,the light form video games are hurt teens eyes.
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Jesus
5/2/2014 04:26:50 am
I think that video games aren't harmful because it can help with coordinations skills. Video games are beneficial to many people (in there opinion),they believe that video games are a great way to be entertained. I agree with this statement bcause I personally play games when I'm bored or have nothing else to
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Chris :)
5/2/2014 04:26:56 am
I think that video games are beneficial because they are educational and relaxing. Most kids need extra help on school and some special kids need a lot more help too. People also need to know what to do for a natural disaster or a attack. So I conclude that video games are beneficial.
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Pauline
5/2/2014 04:26:59 am
I think video games are harmful because they can become an addiction and teens who play video games will become violent. After reading the article, I believe that video games are harmful to teens. One reason is video games can become an addiction to teens. I remember one of my friends plays video games everyday after school. Sometimes she needs to stay up late to finish her assignment because she keeps playing video games and starts her homework very soon. In addiction, teens will become more violent if they play video games. From the text, it states that "both boys and girls who play M-rated games get in fights and damage property more often than teens who don't play M-rated games."
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Qiwen
5/2/2014 04:35:29 am
I like your evidence.
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Alex
5/2/2014 04:29:13 am
I think that video games are harmful because it will get you lazy and you won't have enough energy to do your homework. After reading this article, I believe that video games are harmful to teens because it is addicting and violent and make you lazy. In my experience I think that video games are harmful because it gets you mad and cause stress the evidence I found in the book it said " it causes stress and it will get you lazy
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Qiwen
5/2/2014 04:29:20 am
I think that video games are harmful, because they distract teens from the real world and cause teens to become addicted. After reading the article, I am convinced that video games have negatively influences on teens. Video games cause teens to develop an addiction. According to brain studies, about 8.5% of teens develop an addiction to video games. They are more likely to skip school, receive poor grades, and have social problems. In addition, video games also distract teens from the real world. For example, video games allow many teens to escape from their problems in their real life.
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Pauline
5/2/2014 04:36:10 am
I agree with your opinion that video games are harmful.
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Jian
5/2/2014 04:29:20 am
Good job Leo
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Jian
5/2/2014 04:29:44 am
Good job Charles
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Donrey Pan
5/2/2014 04:36:49 am
Video Games Justification
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Sevastian Trollez
5/2/2014 04:38:31 am
After reading the article, I believe that video games are beneficial to teens because it improves how their brain works.One reason I support the idea that video games improve hand eye coordination.Based on my experience,I reject that video games are harmful because only 8.5% of teens get affected by video games negatively.
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Taylong
5/2/2014 04:38:57 am
Video games are beneficial for people that has an important job so they can practice on their skills, if things when wrong like if you crash it doesn't matter because it a video games, if you die in a video game while playing it you will respawn. In real life you might die and you will be gone forever. Video games might be bad for you if you play too much.
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Kevin NGO
5/2/2014 04:45:17 am
I think video games are beneficial because it is entertaining also help your social skills. After reading the articles I believe that my calculations is right. Games are beneficial because they can increase your hand eye coordination. Also if your play a sport your eyes can focus on the ball better. Games also can increase your social skills. At school you can talk to someone that play the same games as you
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