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B.Le
12/4/2013 12:41:47 am
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K.Lu
12/4/2013 12:42:31 am
The Cell Tale Heart
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S. Yee
12/4/2013 12:43:31 am
The Civil War
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L.Chen
12/4/2013 12:44:25 am
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J. Nguyen
12/4/2013 12:47:04 am
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C. Lim
12/4/2013 12:48:20 am
Alternate Harry Potter Ending
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d.wong
12/4/2013 12:48:48 am
Damion Wong
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R. SALAZAR #1
12/4/2013 12:48:53 am
Raymond’s Run Part 2
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hector benitez
12/4/2013 12:49:12 am
Hector Benitez
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sageandresantos
12/4/2013 12:49:19 am
They kept me in here for hours. They just keep watching me. Night and day, the faces the faces, they keep watching me. When I try to tell warden, he just ignores me like I’m not there, but I could hear the faces talking about me for hours and I think this is going to drive me mad, they won’t stop even during the night. The next morning the faces are gone but instead of the faces, I hear the old man’s heart beating in my head. I had killed the monster why is it still beating I had shouted, “Stop it warden please, I cant take it”. Memories come flashing back to me showing night the murder happen. Day and night he is the memories and now had understand that he will never leave this jail cell ever.
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B. Terzyan
12/4/2013 12:49:49 am
Civil War
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Elwin Luo
12/4/2013 12:49:55 am
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J.Luu
12/4/2013 12:50:09 am
The Game Is On
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S. Phung
12/4/2013 12:50:20 am
Heightened Senses
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Jacob Guzman
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Destiny Luna
12/4/2013 09:40:37 am
What a Phenomenal Essay C: Good Job Jacob
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C.Lam
12/4/2013 12:51:17 am
The Escape of Slavery
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J. Wong
12/4/2013 12:52:19 am
After the Civil War
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K. Bao
12/4/2013 12:52:55 am
Son of Hades
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j
12/4/2013 12:53:17 am
Tell tale heart 2
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M. Zeng
12/4/2013 12:53:22 am
“ The Civil War”
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A.Garnica
12/4/2013 12:53:57 am
Heat
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E.Diep
12/4/2013 12:54:12 am
Wilbur’s Rescue
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Stephanie
12/4/2013 12:54:33 am
Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland
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J.Nieto
12/4/2013 12:55:06 am
What happened to the Grate Gatsby?
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M. Bruno
12/4/2013 12:56:10 am
Michael Bruno
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L. Lee-Niegas
12/4/2013 12:56:24 am
Fan fiction benchmark: Clinging to Hope
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Sierra
12/4/2013 12:56:38 am
The Road Trip That Started It All fan fiction benchmark
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J Chau
12/4/2013 12:56:54 am
Honestly, as many near-death experiences I have had throughout the last few years, I don’t think any of them are as bad as the “Big Fight” I’ve had with my best friend and kind of girlfriend, Annabeth. Annabeth is a daughter of Athena, the goddess of wisdom. When she gets angry, boy, you better watch out. She’d be like a volcano, ready to spew red hot lava everywhere, and would almost be a threat to one of the worst monsters, Typhon. Seriously. I’m not exaggerating. I’ll even give you an example…
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V Ramirez
12/4/2013 12:57:09 am
Star Wars: Death Troopers
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K.Chan
12/4/2013 01:09:00 am
“Another day just gone by so slowly, so tiring,” groaned Rebecca. “Do we have a choice?” I said. (We laid on the cold, stiff hail; covered ourselves with a thin quilt) Rebecca quickly fell asleep; but I didn’t. I stared through the window, out at the bright twinkling stars. Upon them all, the North Star shined the brightest. The star of freedom, that will one day take me north, to the lands where slaves could be free. Freedom, I thought, how would that feel.
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R.Tran
12/4/2013 02:24:43 am
Ryan Tran
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J.Tran
12/4/2013 02:25:26 am
On the time being James went on to finding what happened to all the security guards cause they all went missing . James and Shane went on to the presidents office. When they went in the president wasn’t there. 20minutes later a alarm went of so there must be a break in to rob money. So when Shane and James walked to the area where they put all the cash they caught the thief. The thief threw a flash band at them and ran off into the abyss.
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S.Tang
12/4/2013 02:27:12 am
Allie Finkle is 13 year old girl form Riverside, California. She has friend named Brianna, Isabella, and Maddie. She attend Jordan Middle School and is in 8th grade.
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P.MA
12/4/2013 02:29:14 am
The Civil War
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C.Sun
12/4/2013 02:32:27 am
Mother in Manville 2
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Saiyang Liu
12/4/2013 02:35:15 am
The Time Machine
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V.Lam
12/4/2013 02:35:21 am
Harry Potter and The Maze of Victory
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T. San
12/4/2013 02:41:02 am
Bottom to the top ( diary of the wimpy kid )
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S.Juarez
12/4/2013 02:41:41 am
“Run Peeta, run!” I shouted. We had about 8 guards on our tail, all-firing at us. BAM! Peeta gets shot on his left leg. Peeta started rambling, “If only I ate those barriers, this would have never happened.” I told him to relax, we would all be fine and took a turn in a dark ally. I spot a shadow creeping up on us and prepare to fight. The shadow whispers, “follow me ill keep you safe.”
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A.Argueta
12/4/2013 02:42:53 am
Andrew Argueta
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J.Placencia
12/4/2013 02:43:57 am
Jian Placencia
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M. GONZALEZ
12/4/2013 02:46:19 am
It was a cold November night when Kim saw Blake. She finally had the guts to go up to him and see he if he remember. She yelled” hey Blake do you remember me?” Blake replied “ no sorry miss I don’t sorry.” Kim said “im the girl from the supermarket, you dropped my mayo on the floor and it got all over your shoes.” Blake said “oh yes I remember you, How are you.” Kim replied “im fine.” After that Blake asked kim for her number and kim gave him her number.
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derek
12/4/2013 02:47:10 am
King Of Snakes (A Running Brook Of Horror)
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N.Paul
12/4/2013 02:47:19 am
Melody Brooks (Out of My Mind)
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L. Hernandez
12/4/2013 02:47:27 am
One day a mongoose was really hungry and thirsty and he was very sick, he kept walking and walking and he ended up in a family’s garden. They had a big garden with beautiful flowers. Tommy a boy lived with his parents, he usually played by himself in the garden. Tommy had always wanted a pet but never got one. One morning he went to play in the yard and he saw the mongoose he really liked him but wouldn’t pick him up without his dad’s permission first. He asked his dad if he could keep him. At first his dad wasn’t sure but the gave him food and they noticed he was a very nice mongoose, so they kept him. His dad kept him because he could protect tommy from wild animals that got in the garden.
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K.Situ
12/4/2013 02:49:00 am
Kevin situ
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k.vazquez
12/4/2013 02:49:09 am
There was once a girl named sally. Sally was a hard worker. Sally helps her dad at her shop. Sally has always wanted dogs. Not just any kind of dog’s German shepherds. Sally’s parents would always say no to her when she asked for dogs.
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kevin
12/4/2013 02:49:23 am
Welcome to Hogward
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B. Baldelomar
12/4/2013 02:52:18 am
A young girl named Dicey she lived with her younger brothers and sister’s. Their names are Maybeth, Sammy, James. They all lived with their Grandmother named Gram she was very nice and wise. The reason for that is unfortunately her mother passed away 7 years ago. They all got along well, very united they don’t really argue or fight.
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Matthew Ibarra
12/4/2013 07:27:58 am
Matthew Ibarra
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Q. Li
12/4/2013 09:06:28 am
The Prank, the Lion, and the Faun
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J.Rosales
12/4/2013 09:29:38 am
Tell a Teal Heart
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miguel
12/4/2013 10:16:38 am
Dicey Song
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L.Trang
12/4/2013 12:57:45 pm
In 1854 Mr. and Mrs. Warren was so happy, they had just found out Mrs. Stephanie Warren was pregnant with their 4th child. They named her Brittany Warren. When Joseph, the eldest child heard the news he felt a lot of pressure.
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K. Thipatima
12/4/2013 01:38:11 pm
Hunger Games fanfiction
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S. WONG
12/4/2013 04:01:19 pm
“Hey, want to grab some coffee?”Clary asked, jabbing her finger towards Java Jones, the coffee shop on the corner of the block.
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